8th October 2007, 09:24
spacepoliceman Wrote:Welcome!
Your English is very good, I only spotted one mistake
(sorry
My Grandfather was an Editor for the Toronto Star, Editing is in the blood) you said "people use...''
the correct word is 'used', otherwise it's perfect!
Actually... :p used implies past tense, so use would be the correct form I think. And even if it is wrong then it is a common mistake :p (Google linky)
It doesn't matter really \^_^/ welcome to the Palace yumi, nice of you to introduce yourself,
Bea.
Links to my stories:
General overview with descriptions of the stories. (click me)
Or more direct links:
Main Series:
Chapter 1 - Beautiful Freak (click to read)
Chapter 2 - Snow Day (click a part to read: (1) (2) (3))
Chapter 3 - Revealed Secrets (click a part to read: (1) (2))
Chapter 4 - Seeing the Doctor (click a part to read: (1) (2))
Chapter 5 - A Wet Recovery (click a part to read: (1) (2) (3 - Recovered the version I was working on at 70%, will probably continue this soonish.))
Sakana Sisters:
Click to read: (Chapter 1) - (Chapter 2) - (Chapter 3) - (Chapter 4) - (Chapter 5 - lost all progress, will have to start over.)
EFQ:
Click to read: (Chapter 1) - (Chapter 2) - (Chapter 3) - (Chapter 4 - Lost the whole thing, started over and am now at 40% Going well though.)
[Image: beasiga.jpg][Image: beasigb.jpg]
General overview with descriptions of the stories. (click me)
Or more direct links:
Main Series:
Chapter 1 - Beautiful Freak (click to read)
Chapter 2 - Snow Day (click a part to read: (1) (2) (3))
Chapter 3 - Revealed Secrets (click a part to read: (1) (2))
Chapter 4 - Seeing the Doctor (click a part to read: (1) (2))
Chapter 5 - A Wet Recovery (click a part to read: (1) (2) (3 - Recovered the version I was working on at 70%, will probably continue this soonish.))
Sakana Sisters:
Click to read: (Chapter 1) - (Chapter 2) - (Chapter 3) - (Chapter 4) - (Chapter 5 - lost all progress, will have to start over.)
EFQ:
Click to read: (Chapter 1) - (Chapter 2) - (Chapter 3) - (Chapter 4 - Lost the whole thing, started over and am now at 40% Going well though.)
[Image: beasiga.jpg][Image: beasigb.jpg]