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Greetings from a female muscle fan!
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Hey Guys!

After finishing "Bodybuilding Competition part 3," I was looking for a little feedback regarding which story to focus on writing next. I have 3 concepts that I'm tinkering with:

a.) the next logical step is "Bodybuilding Competition part 4," and without giving away any spoilers, she takes the stage. This is likely to be the second- or third-to-last entry in the Bodybuilding Competition series, but there's plenty more of Seline to come. To be honest, it would be nice to take a break and do something else and come back to it; I tend to storyboard these out but then write them in a single sitting, and it usually takes the vast majority of a day (If I write a section and then try to come back to it later, I usually end up reading what I wrote a few days earlier and ask myself, "What the hell was I thinking" then trash it and start over.)

b.) First story I've written here not featuring Seline, a gym story about a hyperfuta-girl who stands up to a gym (verbal) bully and wins the attention of a beautiful ultra-muscled girl. This will likely follow the porn-format that I've been using mostly for the previous 4 stories: speed through the plot as quickly as possible, through in little jokes and funny quips when the opportunity presents itself, and speed into the pounding and linger on it.

c.) This is the one that I'm most excited about writing but also the most apprehensive. This is the story I had in mind when I was asking about the rules as to what you can and can't write here (non-consensual, underage but of a race that matures sexually at a different rate, language, gore, violence, etc. - to which every response seemed to green-light everything.) The story is a Seline origins story. There's two parts to it but the first part is about 80% of the material, so I guess you could say that Part 1 is chapters 1-4 and Part 2 is chapter 5. The second part does more or less follow the format I've been using (get to the screwing ASAP, mood is kept pretty light ranging from melodramatic to silly.) The first part has a completely different tone, much darker than my other entries, and has torture, gore, non-consensual sex, and even as the writer I think it's deeply disturbing, but necessary - I don't make any money doing this, it's just a hobby and I get these stories in my head that I have to expel onto paper (well, a document.) The timeline will also probably be a little confusing; for some of the elements to have the desired impact, it's necessary to write/read the second part (chapter 5) first, and then go back to the first part (chapters 1-4, in order.) and the first few chapters will have several time jumps of different lengths, but should at least be sequentially in order. This is one that I'm really thinking maybe I should just write for myself to avoid getting in trouble with the forum (or on an FBI watch list!)

Thank you for all the feedback, both reinforcing and constructive. If I may ask, and I'm not sure what the forum rules are regarding this, but I was hoping that I could use this introductions thread (or create a thread "hugefbbluvva feedback" or something) for all feedback and forum interaction and let the story threads be exclusive to the stories. I'm not trying to be rude, I appreciate the interactions in fact, just that I have OCD and would really like the story threads to read out as each of the thread postings are sequential entries of the story.

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RE: Greetings from a female muscle fan! - by dca5347 - 10th April 2022, 03:32
RE: Greetings from a female muscle fan! - by hugefbbluvva - 16th July 2022, 01:23
RE: Greetings from a female muscle fan! - by nnamen - 16th July 2022, 12:34
mid-August progress update - by hugefbbluvva - 13th August 2022, 03:20
RE: Greetings from a female muscle fan! - by nnamen - 20th August 2022, 14:25
RE: Greetings from a female muscle fan! - by hugefbbluvva - 11th December 2022, 18:30

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