A story of mine i wrote.....i know, weird

I found a teeny weeny story i wrote earlier on in my perversity!

i shall post it, and please, tell me what you think, I'd really appreciate it, cuz i think i have a certain way with words, and others think i just pick words at random and type em....so tell me what you think!

Introduction: WARNING: This story, takes a tiny bit of time, getting into the action, and may bore others, but if you read on, be warned, hard rough sex is involved in this story, and is meant as a means of pleasur After, their little ordeal in the bathroom of their work, Anne and Jamie decided to live together, and quit their jobs, to start their own T-girl modeling agency, Anne being the photographer and Jamie of course, being the one to get clients, with the help of Anne as well.

When Jamie, left her New York City loft, she left in a gleeful mood, because she just had the roughest and hottest sex she ever had in a long while with her lover. The second she got out of her building, she tightened her coat up and pulled out her umbrella. “Today is supposed to be beautiful! Not a damn down pour.” though Jamie, as she recalled the weather predictions for the evening and into tomorrow, “73 they said, id say it is about 57 out right now!” she was screaming in her mind. None the less, Jamie was determined not to be stopped by this weather, so she hailed a taxi to her and told him to drop her off at the subway station.

When she finally got there, she tossed the man $75 and told him to keep the change, which he happily did, because it was only a $30 fare, she was feeling generous today. When she got her ticker and onto the subway, she took a seat next to a very very very gorgeous woman, which she couldn’t help but steal glances at every now and then. When she was about half-way to her destination, the woman leaned over and asked if she knew where Madison Square Garden was.

“Um….do you have a map?” asked Jamie.

“Sure do!” replied the girl, thankful for someone’s help.

When she produced the map, her and Jamie were studying it and finding out the fastest route to there, Jamie just happen to look into her shirt, and noticed quite a bit of cleavage peeking out from there, the girl just blushed, obvious to Jamie’s peeks. While they were also figuring it out, Jamie’s hand “slipped” and hit the girls boobs, which made her giggle and made Jamie smirk.

“Hi, my name is Jamie.” she said.

“Hi Jamie, I am Chelsea, nice to meet you.” said Chelsea.

“Same to you Chelsea.” replied Jamie, shaking her hand and smiling.

Along the remainder of the ride, Jamie got to know Chelsea, and found out that she is in NYC to look for a place to live, she just left her boyfriend and was really out on her luck with apartments and such.

“Come live with me Chelsea, it is only me and my friend Anne, we have plenty of room for you!” replied Jamie, hoping Chelsea would say yes

“I don’t know Jamie…