Need help on a story

Hi, long time reader, first time poster (and writer)

I am working on a story - so far it is about 80 pages (expected to end up at around 150 pages), but I would like an experienced hand to look it over and modify it as needed.

This is what I am looking for...

someone to add dialoge (im not very good at it, i am better writing as a continuous monologue from a single point of view, and creating realistic detail) I have a little dialoge but not much...

flesh out (so to speak) the sex scenes, they may be fine, but when writing it can be difficult to see if it is good, and sometimes I feel the need to rush it to continue the story.

On the flip side, without dialoge, sometimes the story feels a little rushed to get to the next sex scene...

Whoever I decide to take on this project can have 100% writer's credit. I am just having fun writing it and dont care about the credit. The only caveat is that I want to finish the story - so far I have just started the 9th chapter and want to continue it to about chapter 11 or 12. From there, I dont care. Oh yeah, my only other condition, is that I want it published here, on F3, Chesttalk, and Storiesonline - any other site is okay with me too. If whoever takes it on doesnt like those sites (or isnt registered), I guess I can take the final copy there...

I also dont know how to post it on here with the 'spoiler' or how to hypertext it or anything other than copy/paste.

The basic premise of the story is:

A 13-14 year old futa girl (very petite, with a 12 incher and a very healthy chest) who initially hates her male part. She ignores it and concentrates solely on getting action with her female side. Through this she slowly learns to appreciate her penis, and eventually finds a somewhat stable relationship with a girl that forces her to come to terms with it.

The part of the story that I have worked up to is where her regular fuck-buddies move away - and I am about to really make the story a little deeper. I have concrete ideas on where I want it to go from here and will write them over the next couple of weeks. Whoever I choose to work on this will get a better outline of where I will be going later.

I am hoping for a seasoned writer that has several posts on her already - but Ill see how the turnout is first before making a decision. Im looking for something in the direction of Kelly's Story, Trish's Monster, or any HoneyMoon Story. As opposed to the feel of Resident Penis or the Flesh Project.

Please reply with any experience and how best to send you a copy of the file.

I will probably not look at this post again until after the holiday, but will choose someone by mid-next-week.

Thanks and I look forward to seeing it online!

here is a taste....

My body was trembling now, and I noticed I had two wet spots in my sweatpants. One, disgustingly was at the tip of the tent in my pants where my dick ended. The other was in my crotch. I didn’t want to ruin my sweats, so I pulled them off, makin