Beta readers

Okay i am going to try my hand at a new story. Its all OC... its starts out about this girl, who is average and normal, until she stumbles across this book. Her world slowly begins to change and things start to happen. It is got to be the stupidest thing i have ever thought of but sigh oh well anyway i was wondering if i could have some one read over my chapters before i post them that way when the readers read the story they don't give up on it my grammer sucks.

If some one does i will show you what i have so far and work on the title with you and discuss what the story is about in more detail.