The Secret Lives of Goddesses

Hello everyone. I've been working on this story for a few weeks now, and have been posting it on Deviantart and Literotica. A post on r/futanari pointed me in the direction of this forum, and wow, it seems I've found futa headquarters for the internet!

My story is about the romance between an immortal futanari woman and a beautiful girl.

Here is The Secret Lives of Goddesses:

Chapter 1

Thursday, May 26, 1994

Jessica wasn't like the other girls. Crouching, her back against the brick wall of her high school, she clasped her face to hide the tears that rolled down her cheeks. Strawberry blonde locks further obscured any view of her as she silently wept. She was going to miss another class, unable to face the others, once again crying alone out in the soccer field. In the skirt and dress shirt of her school uniform she settled further down into the fresh grass, the cool morning dew wetting her naked thighs.

Why did the other girls have to be so mean to her? They showed no sympathy when they teased - though 'tease' is a gentle word for the abuse she endured. They loved the fact that she, now eighteen, had been repeating her eleventh year of school for the second time. They called her 'stupid', or worse. The fact was that she was no dumber or smarter than any of them, but she was well behind in her grades because of all the classes she'd miss, unable to face the cruelty of her classmates. It added insult to her injury that the girls mocking her were now two years her junior. It didn't even matter any more that these younger girls didn't understand why they teased. They were simply imitating the treatment Jessica would receive from her original rivals, who had already graduated. At their school, shunning Jessica was 'a thing'. The teachers and administration noticed, but cared little.

She was not a very fortunate girl at all. Her life may have been very different in a more 'normal' school, but that was a privilege she could not enjoy. She, like all of the other girls, was an orphan. Without families, the girls of St. Vincent's Roman Catholic Girl's Orphan Secondary formed extremely tight bonds, and in turn their rivalries were just as intense. If she had family, maybe she would have learned the confidence to stand up for herself, and mistreatments such as the ones she was subjected to would have not came to fruit.

If there were boys in the school also, maybe she would have been treated differently and felt some sort of self worth. The shunning and ostracization she received really boiled down to one unfortunate circumstance: intense jealousy, on the part of the other girls. In Jessica's almost all-female environment she didn't fully understand this, but it was indeed the case.

The teasing began at the onset of puberty. At the age of eleven, seemingly overnight, Jessica became taller than the other girls. Breasts appeared on her chest. She began to bleed from places the girls didn't y