An Unorthodox Punishment

Hello Everyone,

I've been a lurker here for quite a while now and thought I would mention that I'm finally trying to give something back. I present An Unorthodox Punishment, a series that I am currently writing that I believe falls right into your field =). Although it's my second ongoing work (My first series I am currently stuck on sadly), I thoroughly enjoy where An Unorthodox Punishment is going and hope that you will too. I tend to upload to my deviantart page which can be found here, http://ragnarok385.deviantart.com/ but I'll start uploading the story parts here as well for your reading pleasure. Any comments you have are greatly appreciated as it certainly makes one a better writer in the end.

Synopsis:

Tim discovers that his girlfriend isn't quite as faithful as he initially believes. His girlfriend, Bethany, on the other hand, doesn't exactly believe she's being unfaithful, at least until she gets caught with another girl's lover. Tim takes it upon himself to doll out a little punishment in order to help Bethany realize what it is she's really looking for. An admirable cause to be sure, but one not often accomplished by summoning a succubus into the world of mortals. Deals are made, bargains upheld, and all out mayhem practically ensured as nothing seems to go quite according to plan.

Bethany's eyes slowly opened as the world came into focus. She sighed softly as her eyes took in the pale blue ceiling she didn't recognize and the tacky posters of various scantily clad women on the walls, each one in sporting a different seductive pose. Her right hand slowly lifted from beneath the covers to brush strands of her auburn hair out of her face careful not to make any noise lest she wake the still sleeping companion of this particular bed.

She tilted her head forward slightly to survey the damage, and found what she had assumed was the case; her bra draped over a chair on the far corner, and following the toppled books on a desk and the floor she located her jeans. The shirt she had been wearing last night lay crumpled against the door, and she finally located her panties wadded up at the end of the bed. The weight to her left shifted slightly, and Bethany decided it was probably time to get up.

Trying to be as quiet as possible she slid out from beneath the covers, and gently went to rest one foot on the ground. The soft tink of her foot contacting the beer bottle caused her to freeze. Bethany lay still for a few heartbeats, hoping the body next to her hadn't awoken. Finally, she let out a soft sigh of relief and lowered her other leg over the bed and sat up. She reached to the end of the bed, grabbed her panties and slid her legs into them, slowly standing to stay as quiet as possible, and also to help keep balance as her mind was still fuzzy with the alcohol from the night before.

When Bethany was sure she could walk around the room with the proper care required, she began stepping over the various art