A attempt at a poem
Story by draconismaximus
upon reading http://www.futanaripalace.com/showthread.php?47498-A-Short-Poem I decide to try my own hand at a verse, hopefully mine will be no worse. While I would like kindness more importantly give me some kind of feedback.
there was once a fellow who new
his mind would show him whats true,
and what beautiful visions he drew
his pen verily flew
with nary a hair askew.
One day he absently cast
his skill to the unlikely task
true love to unmask.
When done he felt himself a fool
for though he followed the rule
his woman also had her own tool
he thought it a flawed vision,
forced a gender division.
new not did he his precision.
his mind filled with doubt
heart wanting to shout
love did win out
the world he would scout
through many a year
he found many a peer
but none shook the fear
his love was no nearer
He searched through glade and fountain
he ventured every moor and mountain
Until he searched hollowed ground
where often stories abound
of such wonders found
when people turn to the Gods,
council from oracle, or seer.
Sought her from Delphi,
spoke to each mid-wife and psychic
though he did try
his days grew quick.
ON his last day
while going to pray
in a most glorious way
the work would finally pay
There was a glorious bod,
gifted above and below
as you very well know,
and pilgrim began to feel odd;
all this time, oh what a crime
the work had never been flawed
when speaking to this beauty beyond peer
their connection was clear.
They spent that night
in carnal delight
he took her, she took his rear
with joyous tear his vision did blear
once they did cease
his soul had found peace
and sadly his soul, it took flight.