Learning Curves (Futa/Female, High-School, transform, more tags with each section)

EDIT (3 JUN 2012)

I wrote this around 10 months ago, and it was not only my first erotic story, but my first fiction writing since around 6th or 7th grade. There's a lot about it that's pretty awful.

But I really like the characters -- Tamara especially, but also lots of the others. And I actually have the thing planned out for quite a long while (I don't have an end in mind, but I'd have at least two "seasons" if it were a TV show).

I'm re-writing some of the old stories, and I have a new one almost done, so I thought I'd bump this up for the moment. For as rough as poorly as some of these stories are written, this is what got me started writing, so I wouldn't mind getting some feedback while I clean things up.

When I "reboot" this series I'll probably start a new thread since some of this is sort of painful for me to look back on (my writing here is pretty rough), and I'd like to be sure to only post finished stories from now on (I'm horrible about leaving things unfinished otherwise)

Ambers (no sex, prologue and character introduction)

((Proofreading note: my spellchecker turned some Ambers into amebas. I'll owe a Moon Pie to anyone who catches one.))

Ambers

The Ambers were the most popular girls in school, by their own admission. Not every girl in that circle was actually named "Amber", but three of them, two of whom made nearly every "most wanted" list had that name. *The* Amber was Amber Royce; she had looks and style, did some modeling for local ads, and once someone had been invited to an Amber Party they had been greenlighted to hang out with or date anyone they wanted. The second Amber in most people's minds was Amber Greenfield, who had had been playing for the Lady Gophers varsity teams in both basketball (fall) and lacrosse (spring) since her freshman year, which was not as much a testament to her ability as it was to how bad the varsity teams at the time were. Amber Greenfield was known as "Aggs" to the Ambers and those who sought their favor, and "Greeny" to the Lady Gophers (along with fans of team and it's two biggest attractions).

As a whole, the Ambers weren't very mean girls, which is probably why the school seemed to like them more and more every year. *The* Amber was only nice to most peers because it got her what she wanted, but part of reason Aggs made varsity so soon was that she had a natural sense of teamwork and fair play, and she put her whole heart into whatever she did. Amber would have preferred to just ignore Aggs and her little group of friends, but by including them the #2 Amber was less likely to advance to #1 status, and it helped show that the real Amber was not as petty as some people claimed. Whatever Amber's other personality flaws might be, she was certainly pragmatic.

The darkhorse challenger for the role of Alpha Amber was Tamara Knight, who was without question the sexiest woman anyone had ever seen. Amber wished it was hyperbole, but the