A Final Fantasy X-2 story and a Gundam Seed Destiny story

These are two stories I've been working on for a while and wanted to share. I normally wouldn't do this but I posted my latest chapter to my FF story over a week ago and haven't got a single review even though the other chapters got reviews. I'm a bit worried and feel that direct feedback would be good.

Meer Campbell Spreads Her Seed

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6763244/1/Meer_Campbell_Spreads_Her_Seed

Paine's Dilemma

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6788101/1/Paines_Dilemma

Any and all feedback is appreciated. Thanks all.