The Untold Tales of Kalahandris

Well, I thought instead of a vague, smut-filled story about some random plotline, I thought I'd attempt for an actual story for once. There isn't any futa or smut yet, but, like with many good stories, they'll eventually work their way into my hopeful masterpiece. But first! I need some comment on the first, and unfinished chapter of this creation of mine...

TEMPORARILY NONEXISTENT.