Finding Love at the Dog & Pony Show

I would describe it as an "Extreme Body Modification Love Story"

This is an experiment in how far you can go with a concept before it passes into "too obscene to read". Does anyone get off on this? If so I would love to chat :) - e-mail preferred.

Would love some feedback on writing style: too confusing, too breathless, too wordy?

Of course comments on content are appreciated too... I mean. Apart from me is there anyone in the world that likes this stuff?

And yes - I would like to be Friel :)

Its furry content is light and it DOES NOT feature bestiality. This is the "metric version" as it is vaguely cyberpunk in nature and it seemed to make most sense. I can easily create an imperial measurement version if you would prefer.

BTW - if there are artists out there that feel inspired but need a little "commission encouragement" then I am always open to suggestions.