No plot, Just Futa on Male :)

This my first attempt at ever writing a story, it's sure to be filled with TONS of errors in spelling format and the like. PLease, give me some reviews, pointers and tips, just be constructive and dont flame me too much. If theres a lot of positive feedback that i can work with, ill post the prequel and write another chapter, Lemme know hwta you guys and gals think.

*Contains Futa on Male, a little violence (nothing serious)*

Basically i skipped the lead up to this story inf avor of just some good old sex, to sum these things up, the main character is a virgin who spies on his neighbor, the beautiful futa named sarah. He lusts after this girl for several years while hes in highschool before this event happens, in which she catches him, and boy, she is pissed.