Inexistent Innocense - New story from Zixtank

If you like information about a story before readin it, please read this before reading the story.

For the actual story, see next post on this thread. =)

Okay, so I hope to actually finish this one and I think I will too. I've been struggling a bit with my writing for the past year and haven't posted more than mere outlines of a story for well over a year and a half.

Either way, here' my new story that I'll hopefully finish. I plan on writing at least five chapters so we'll see.

I'll update them when I have time and seeing as this year is pretty slack considdering school, I'll probably get some spare time to write this.

Okay, so I've been thinking a bit. this story of mine is a bit controvesrial seeing as it contains tentacles, but don't be alarmed. It's not tentacle rape. Just tentacles. Just give it a shot before ya say whether ya find it sick or not. I have tried to make it seem erotic and left out any form for extreme sex (i don't like bondage and rape and all that, but if it's requested, maybe I'll give it a shot).

The tentacles appear on the back of one of the main girls who's mostly through her life tried to hide them from everyone and only her parents, best friend and love-interest know of them. She uses them sexually, but not for rape.

Anyways, My new story is here and titled Inexistent Innocense (I'm not entirely sure if I spelled it correctly so if I didn't, please correct me ^^ )

Important:

When I write and read here online, I've noticed that most writers, no matter how good in their own genre, tend to leave out certain things like what the story contains or whatever so I've decided to tag each chapter (whether it's futa, loli, shota, non-futa, rape, tentacles, extreme, SM, BDSM, MMF, mff and things alike) in a spoiler-tag just above each chapter.

Critics:

I love getting critics on my stories, both good and bad ones so that I can find my faults. So please, comment to your heart's content and tell me what you think. I always read all my critics and feedback, no matter how long or ranting it is.

If you just wish to add a "nice story" type of reply, at least give me a rating from 1 to 10 on how well you find it written. 1 means shitty and poorly written while 10 means awesome.

As stated above, the actual story if in the next post on this thread. Enjoy =D