Sick Note, a new story, new member

Hi all, I'm aaron, longtime lurker, first time poster.

Sick Note's a story that's been bouncing around in my head for a few months, finally put to paper (well, screen). I thought I'd make my first post some thing to say thanks, not just to all you folk at futapalace, but the futa community as a whole.

"Sick Note" is my first crack at erotic fiction, and really my first bit of creative writing that wasn't a school assignment. That said, any advice on how I can improve is greatly appreciated.

About the story: No special descriptors here. No furry, loli, guro, scat, anything like that. This chapter has our main character feelin' herself up, the rest of the story will probably be just good clean futa-on-futa fun. Enough with that, on with the story!

Sick Note

A sidestory to Phys Ed

by aaron

CHAPTER I

Ms. Lynd sat at her desk, filling out papers when suddenly, she heard a knock at the door of her office.

"Come in..." she called absentmindedly.

The door opened slowly, and in walked a girl of 16, dressed in the school's P.E. uniform, a pair of fire truck-red running pants and a spotless white t-shirt adorned with the school's logo, a Spartan helmet. The girl had shoulder length light blonde hair and eyes that, depending on who you asked, were some combination of green, blue or grey. She stood at the door, unsure of what to do, until the school's nurse turned around in her chair.

"Ah, you must be... Miss Vesper." said Ms. Lynd, with an almost too sweet smile. "So tell me, what seems to be the problem?"

With the door still ajar, Alex Vesper stood, with her hands pulling her shirt down below her hips in the front, obviously quite shy. Finally, she closed the door behind her.

"You can drop the act now." she said, quietly. Miss Lynd laughed. "I guess I do lay it on a bit thick. But don't just stand there, take a seat, relax." Alex did so, and finally let her arms leave the spot they had been in, ever since she left P.E. class with permission to go to the nurse's office.

"So, do those briefs I gave you help at all?" Ms. Lynd asked Alex. "A little..." mumbled Alex.

"Been uncomfortable all day, hasn't it?" said Ms. Lynd, with a small grin at the corner of her mouth.

"Yeah" said Alex, finally relaxing a little. "Every day at dressout, it happens. I can't help it at all, no matter how hard I try not to look. Especially today! I woke up too late, so I didn't have any time to, um..." Alex, quieted down, a little embarrassed.

"Jerk off?" Ms. Lynd interjected. Alex's eyes bugged slightly, and Ms. Lynd giggled. "I *am* an adult, you know. I don't have any problem with you saying how you feel. Why don't you slip into something a little more comfortable?" Alex stood up and pulled down her shorts. Underneath was something a little like a pair of men's briefs, but the material was thicker, and the elastic tighter. Below the fabric was a bulge stretching down over her vagina and back around to her rear. She put her thumbs into her briefs an