Precious Spring by Zixtank

Story by Zixtank

Okay, just read the whole description here before actually deciding whether or not to read this story. Please. Okay? Good.

I've been having a lot of trouble about what to write and the story I've posted now leaves me in worry if people wants to read it or not, seeing as it contains tentacles (with no rape). This has a tendency to inflict one of two reactions; complete rejection or love as when it comes to tentacles, you either like them or ya don't, there's rarely anything in between.

I'm not much for tentacles in general, but I don't mind it if there's no rape involved (even though at first, I wondered how that was even possible).

If that's the case, then I've really managed something I didn't think was possible, so please, just try it out and give a response. I'm adding a poll to ask if I should continue the story or not. It's basically your choice all in all.

Btw, this story is but a prototype, so if you want me to go on with it, I'll rewrite it.

Btw(2) This is also the first story where I write in third person and to be honest, I really dont have a main character. There's six people in the group I've written about and I tend to move the perspective between them rather randomly, so please forgive me for that.

Story content: futa/tentacle (NOT RAPE), sensual sex, incest (side plot (don't ask)), girl/girl

Precious Spring

Chp 1

There are few things in this world that can describe the awesomeness of what was about to happen, Jake thought, settling into a cozy position on the floor, leaning his back against the sofa as Lisa flung off her shirt. There was a wave of woos and whistles as it happened and Lisa hid her face in her knees, but laughed even so.

“Okay, Tommy, your time to shuffle.” Jake said, handing Tommy the card deck and he shuffled them with the skills of a Vegas dealer before he split the deck and handed each player one card at a time, over and over until the deck was gone.

Jake looked into his hand; two fours, hearts and spades, the king and ten of hearts and the queen of diamonds. He silently cursed and shoved the fours forward and drew two cards. He was at a disadvantage, he noticed as his eyes fell on his new cards; eight and nine of diamonds.

“I’m out,” he said and sighed when it became his turn to bid. He was already down to his boxers and socks, so he didn’t want to blow it just there. He took a swig of his beer and looked over at Tammy who was obviously in the same situation, as she too threw her cards into the middle of the small ring they sat in.

“Iz, it’s your turn.” Ashley said with a smile. Iselin looked rather pale as she was betting her socks and her shirt. “Do you see?”

“Out as well,” she said, throwing her cards over Jake’s and Tammy’s.

“Aw, you’re no fun,” Ashley said with a grin. “I bet my shirt on this,” she said. She only wore her panties and shirt now. As she barely had any breasts, she hadn’t bothered wearing a bra, not to a sleepover. “Your bid, Lisa.”

“Panties,” she said and Tommy nodded. Lisa was only wearing her bra and panties, though because of her humongous rack, it was clear why she bet her panties first.

“Boxers,” he said. He finished his beer and Lisa laid out her cards; two pairs, knights and queens, both of clubs.

“Sorry Lisa,” Ashley said with a grin and showed her cards. “Three of a kind; nines of spades, clubs and hearts.” Lisa pushed her playfully, but Tommy just chuckled evil-like.

“Sorry to both of you, but lucky for the rest of us.” He smiled as he laid forth his cards. “Four of a kind; Ace.” He said proudly and everyone gaped. “So, hurry up, me ladies.” Lisa sighed and pulled of her pair first; black lace lingerie, Jake noted. Underneath, she was shaved to the skin, though she quickly sat up on her knees and pulled her legs together, blocking everything from sight.

“Damn you,” Ashley said with a sullen expression as she sacrificed her shirt. Ashley’s breasts were small compared to most girls her age, but they were still worth looking at.

“Nice,” Jake said and grinned. “Now, Iz. Deal for us,” Iselin, being the most klutzy of the gang, fumbled a lot with the cards and it wasn’t before Tommy shuffled and split the deck for her that they could play again.

“Final round for the two of you,” Tommy said and pointed with his index and little finger at Lisa and Ashley. Jake looked down at his hand and saw to his amazement that he had a good hand; already two pairs; eights of spades and hearts and kings of hearts and clubs. The extra card was a two of hearts which he exchanged and in return, was gifted with yet another king, this one of diamonds. He had to keep himself from grinning though. He swiped his gaze around the circle to see Tommy throwing his cards and Ashley doing the same after she had drawn four new cards. Eventually, only Jake and Iselin was left.

“All in,” Jake said. “I’m getting tired of this.”

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