The Angel's Aprentice

Story by Sketch

Alrighty, I'm feeling a bit writey tonight... so why not kick off a story? I've kinda had this idea running through my head after checking out a few angel themed peices of artwork... but I'll say no more. Enjoy!

PS: If youve ever gotten to know me, it should be no surprise that this is a transformation themed story. Just a heads up

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CHAPTER 1: Rebirth

"Uggh.. dammit, come on...." The 17 year old tapped away at his keyboard, sighing a bit in frustration as the page loaded into yet another 404.

"...shit" He tried the address a final time, only to be left in disapointment. The forum site was down again... it could be for quite some time. Needless to say, having no access to freebie porno links had him a bit peeved, not to mention quite unsatisfied.

His name was Devin, an unsocial, unpopular highschool senior. His dirty blonde hair was lazily tied in a ponytail, his facialhair somewhere between 5 o'clock shadow and unkempt. His dull green eyes were at all times hidden behind his glasses, and generally reflected his overall unenthusiasm about... well, most everything. A bluish zip hoodie was, at the time, slipped on over a simple black tee, with a pair of slightly worn jeans completeing the less-than-dynamic outfit. He was slightly pudgy from inactivity, but by no means ugly.He was just incredibly average, almost to a degree of blandness.

But that was all about to change.

His room was suddenly bathed in a white light, the flash causing him to fall from his chair in shock. "AHH! Ngg.. w-what the hell is going on.." A figure was beging to materialize ith in the light, revealing what apeared to be a human silhouette. Devin found himself backing into the wall from an odd mix of excitement and terror, his body shivering from the baffling experience. The silhouette became more detailed with each passing second, quickly taking on the shape of a beautiful woman. "I.. I refuse to believe this is even happening right now..."

After what seemed an eternity, the light disipated, and Devin found himself looking over at a beatiful, blonde haired girl. What's more, she was totally nude. "M-my god... w-w-who are you...?" His body was still shivering slightly from the bizarre experience.

The woman only smiled, winking over at him, curling a finger in hopes he'd aproach. He could only stare back for a moment and shake his head. "N-no... answer me..." Her expression swiftly changed from lustfull to poutty. "Well.. if you NEED to know..." She smirked a bit at him, letting out a small giggle. "My name is Aleina. I'm a messenger for the big guy upstairs, as well as a dealer of devine punishment."

Her peppy tone seemed a bit unnatural considering the gravity of her words. "A.. An angel?!? You honestly expect me to believe that? I mean, granted, you kinda just 'poofed' into my room without any warning, but that light was easily bight enough for anyone to slip in unseen."

She let out a similar smirk. "Hard to convince, eh...?" He body let off a soft glow for a moment, a pair of wings stemming from her back. Within moments, a pair of large, white wings hung from her shoulder blades. "Good enough, kid?"

He stumbled to his feet in disbelief. "I... N-no way.. you... I..." He sat down, sighing in confussion. "Fine.. you're an angel... what do you want with me?" Aleina frowned at him, shaking her head. "Lust, sloth, greed, glutony, envy, pride, and wrath.... the damned seven. You've got multiple counts with each one. That essentailly means that you're in need of judgement." Her frown slowly shifted to a smirk. "Judgement day has come and gone behind your back. We've come to a tie up in punishment, so this is where you come in."

"I... b-but... fine.." Devin felt his heart sink... this wasnt good at all. "What are my options?"

"Well... eternal damnation.."

"NO! Whats the other?"

"...servitude as an angel"

He stared at her for a moment. "...Im sorry...?" She giggled a bit again, smiling. "You can join us as my aprentice. These sins are your only real flaws, so we're letting you off easy. Basicly, it's an eternity of devine comunity sevice."

Silence hung in the air for quite some time, before he finally responded. "I... I'll take the service job."

Aleina smiled softly, nodding in aproval. "Good choice." She snapped her fingers, suddely causing Devin to stand up before her, his clothes desolving from his body. "This may tickle... but dont worry. From what Im told, it feels incredible for the most part."

The boy's body was suddenly overcome with a feeling of pleasure. "Whats... going on..?"

"Your body is becoming that of an angel... dont worry, it'll be over soon." With those words, he felt himself rise from the ground, another wave of pleasure hitting him. "Ngahh!" He let out a moan as the pleasure echoed through his body, panting loudly... and soon, he was out cold from the overflow of such intense feeling.

"Hehehe... good... now to have some fun.." She began

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