Kingdom Hearts II: Sweet and Salty

Hey all. I'm Will... First time posting a story on here, and it's a fairly old one, but I've had a friend recommending the place to me. I'm always looking for ways to improve myself, so I welcome any criticism, even on a story as old as this one. Thanks for reading.

This is actually the first hentai story I wrote, on request from a user named MagnoFlux. It's in six parts, but I'm going to post it just a bit at a time. Fair warning that there's a decent amount of plot leading into the actual sex. This takes place near the end of KH2.

{m/futa, oral, anal, rom}

~ Sweet and Salty ~

by Will

Warnings: Plot; Length; Futanari; Minor Spoilers

"That wasn't fair!!"

Sora looked at Yuffie in confusion as Donald shouted back, "We won fair and square!"

Yuffie growled and pointed at the Keyblade wielder and his companions. "How is three against one fair?"

They looked at each other as if to say, Is she serious? Goofy scratched his head and pointed out the obvious, "But...ya had Leon there, didn' cha?"

Dropping her arm in embarrassment, Yuffie muttered, "Oh, him." Lot of good he was, she thought angrily to herself, remembering how he had been dropped without landing a single hit on the trio.

Regaining some of her fire, she again pointed at them, straight at Sora, "That was still three against two!"

As Donald was about to launch into another tirade, Sora put a hand on the duck's shoulder. He smiled at her -- briefly causing her heart to flutter, even as mad as she was -- and said, "If it's that important to you, we can have a rematch later on. After we've rested up, how about another go? You versus me?"

Yuffie's ire drained away, and she suddenly felt a bit foolish for her outburst. Still she should have won! This time she wouldn't lose! "You're on, Sora! The Grand Ninja Yuffie won't be beaten so easily twice!"

Sora laughed, looking at her with his clear blue eyes. "Wasn't that easy the first time. I'm the Keyblade master, though -- I won't be going easy on you." The young ninja grinned in excitement as Sora added, "Winner keeps the trophy."

With that, Sora waved and the three of them walked off to board their gummi ship. Yuffie smiled at their backs, watching Sora walk away, until she realized where her gaze had lowered and turned away, blushing furiously.

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Doing a short little spin in front of a mirror, Yuffie sighed. She took the yellow scarf back off and tossed it onto her bed. Turning sideways, she cupped her breasts through her black flower-print tank top, wishing she could will them to grow larger. She was nearly an adult, and still lacking any womanly curves.

The young ninja wished she could be sexy enough to draw someone's gaze: a particular someone's. She felt a stirring between her legs as her mind wandered.

"Planning something special?"

Yuffie squealed in shock, jolted out of her fantasies. Cloud stood there with his head in the doorway. "What the..? Cl