the first two pages of my new story

I wanted to post the first few pages of my new story. I got the idea for this story from some pictures that i saw on 4chan and decided that i wanted to begin writing it. I hope that is up to snuff for this place, there are a lot of good writers here and it is my hope to be able to hold my own here one day. well with out any further ado here they are, i will hopefully i will be able to add more tonight. i am very sleepy though so who knows *_*.

Her name was veronica. It was the name that her mother gave her; it would not be the one veronica would have chosen. Her mother was the mistress of the castle and the land that surrounded it. Veronica was not sure as to how long her mother had been the ruler of the land but it must have been long she thought, she had scoured the library for any mention of when her mother began her rule. It was possible that her mother had the scholars remove any mention of previous rulers. Veronica spent a good month searching for any information, finding nothing she stopped looking.

It was the twenty first day of the month and it was time to take care of the cattle. Her mother decided that it was time for her to take the responsibility of keeping them alive and healthy. Veronica moved to the window after laying in bed thinking of all the things that she needed to do for the cattle. The room was big; there were no flat walls as her room sat in the tallest tower of the castle. The walls wrapped around her. The window took up most of the southern side of the room, the window went from the floor up to the point where the ceiling began to angle up. In the middle of the window a set of doors that opened inward towards a deck that wrapped around the entire room.

Veronica stepped out on to the cold stone of the deck. The magically heated floor in her room did not carry out on to it. The cool morning wind whipped across her naked teen body as she moved to the railing and looked out across the city and that sat all around the castle and moved out towards the horizon. She stood for a moment at the spot as she felt her nipples harden from the wind. It was a normal morning ritual for her, she loved feeling her body respond to the stimuli of the natural world. It was one of the things that her mother did that she liked to do as well.

She walked around the deck looking at the city as it slowly came alive for the day ahead. She stopped and looked and to the north and the sea that seemed to go on forever. There were many ships docked in the bay so many more in the past the mouth of the bay that counting them would be pointless. Veronica played a normal game in her head trying to figure out what each ship was bringing in. Minuets passed as her mind wandered on to all the different things the multitude of ships where bringing in. The bell towers in the chapel that sat in the city behind her rang out.

“Shit!” Veronica yelled to the wind.

She was late for taking care of the cattle. It was not that she usually cares if she was lat